- The thesis of my paper is, Kyle has a strong opinion about education and a good reason for it.
-Some of the main points are:
* Who kyle is and what he does for a living now.
* Kyle's opinion on education and sports and, if education can benefit you in sports.
* If education was a positive experience or negative and why, and who influence his opinion.
-The peer review helped me see that my sentence structure needs some more work. And in just pointing out the small mistakes I made in some spelling and commas.
- Getting a outline of what to do was a tremendous help, before that I had no idea of were to begin and was stressed out about it. The outline helped me get over that.
- On this paper I received 3 pages worth of info, outline, and wrote my first draft then typed it out after words. As well on this paper I sat and wrote the entire paper in one sitting.
- I wrote the paper out first then I typed it out, also creating the outline was a big plus in helping me with the paper.
- I was most pleased with this paper in the fact that I wrote it in the correct format, because at first I was unsure if I had done so.
Hi Josh,
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry to hear that peer review hasn't helped you much. What could we do differently? While you do have a lot of great detail in Task 1 and Task 2, we really need to sort out the sentence structure. What might be most helpful is meeting with me once a week. If you are willing, let me know and we can set aside a specific time and day to meet. This would be beneficial for you in regard to the next task assignments and for 104. Let me know what you think.
Ms. C